Hi there Orly,
What a terrific 100WC you’ve written this week! Well done to you on an excellent attempt. You have built up a lot of tension in your story – I’m very keen now to know what your ultimate adventure is going to be.
You have a great vocabulary and your imagination knows no bounds. Take the time to check out some of the spellings before you finish a piece of writing.
Excellent work – keep it up!
Thomas (Team 100WC)
Ireland
Hi there Orly,
What a terrific 100WC you’ve written this week! Well done to you on an excellent attempt. You have built up a lot of tension in your story – I’m very keen now to know what your ultimate adventure is going to be.
You have a great vocabulary and your imagination knows no bounds. Take the time to check out some of the spellings before you finish a piece of writing.
Excellent work – keep it up!
Thomas (Team 100WC)
Ireland