The thing that interested me most about this piece is that it sounds as though the narrator lives in a plane on the ground. What a great idea! It already makes your story really unique. You might find it useful to proof-read your work and add commas after adverbial phrases like ‘Then,’ and your subordinate clauses. I look forward to reading your next post, Jameela!
The thing that interested me most about this piece is that it sounds as though the narrator lives in a plane on the ground. What a great idea! It already makes your story really unique. You might find it useful to proof-read your work and add commas after adverbial phrases like ‘Then,’ and your subordinate clauses. I look forward to reading your next post, Jameela!