Thank you for sharing your writing this week. The two donkeys described sound darling, and I particularly enjoyed the description of their “silky manes”. Your story flow logically and the accompanying photograph is well chosen.
Take time to check for capitals at the beginning of your sentences and for names.
Hello Yuki,
Thank you for sharing your writing this week. The two donkeys described sound darling, and I particularly enjoyed the description of their “silky manes”. Your story flow logically and the accompanying photograph is well chosen.
Take time to check for capitals at the beginning of your sentences and for names.
Keep up your writing!
Tracey
Team 100WC
San José, California, US