Thank you for entering this week’s 100WC I really enjoyed reading your writing.
I was very impressed with how descriptive your writing was. You really painted a picture for me because you made me use my senses.
I think that you used simile and personification really well I enjoyed the imagery that you created with phrases such as bony hands.
Your cliff hanger ended kept me wondering about what might happen next!
Hi there, Leon,
Thank you for entering this week’s 100WC I really enjoyed reading your writing.
I was very impressed with how descriptive your writing was. You really painted a picture for me because you made me use my senses.
I think that you used simile and personification really well I enjoyed the imagery that you created with phrases such as bony hands.
Your cliff hanger ended kept me wondering about what might happen next!
Well done, keep up the good work 🙂
Mrs Radd (Team 100WC) Northamptonshire, England.