Wow, Isaac! You have really reflected upon the different views that the audience could have towards Hamlet and used lots of evidence from the play!
I like how you have made your blog post really clear and easy to read.
I would like to see you opening your writing with an introduction- to explain to your reader what you will be writing about. Have a look at Edie and Sasha’s blog entries for good examples of this.
Also, what is your conclusion? What is your own opinion? Do you feel Hamlet is an evil character or do you feel sorry for him? Perhaps you have a mixed opinion which is fine- but you need to explain this!
Awarded: Gold Star (For your excellent reflections and evidence from the play)
I like reading this blog Isaac! 🙂
Wow, Isaac! You have really reflected upon the different views that the audience could have towards Hamlet and used lots of evidence from the play!
I like how you have made your blog post really clear and easy to read.
I would like to see you opening your writing with an introduction- to explain to your reader what you will be writing about. Have a look at Edie and Sasha’s blog entries for good examples of this.
Also, what is your conclusion? What is your own opinion? Do you feel Hamlet is an evil character or do you feel sorry for him? Perhaps you have a mixed opinion which is fine- but you need to explain this!
Awarded: Gold Star (For your excellent reflections and evidence from the play)
Thanks miss Godwin; I’ll remember next time.